When I became a Girl, an Unexpected Love Quarrel Occurred!

When I became a Girl, an Unexpected Love Quarrel Occurred! Ch:17

Chapter 17: Heaven and Hell Simultaneously Exist.

Author: Sakurada Family.

Character Cheat Sheet: For everybody “including me”. To help remember all these names and characters.

Minazuki Amane(水無月周 aka あまね) Our protagonist. Ordinary black hair, cut shoulder length. Normal skin, not particularly fair with ordinary eyes. Slightly taller than Alice. And her breast are a bit bigger.

Minazuki Alice(ありす) Golden Shiny hair, blue eyes. Fair soft skin. She is pretty much really beautiful. one of the two beauties in school.


Takanashi Rinka(高梨凛花)Aka Rin-chan. Black hair styled in twin tails. Eyes more slanted. Gives impression of strong woman. Is a diligent student who is kind with good looks. Very good athletically.

Kiniwa Ena(砂庭江奈) Aka Ena-chan. Shoulder length chestnut colored hair.Gives off the impression of a gentle kind girl. Poor with physical activities and got big boobies.

Yanomiya Sora(夜乃宮蒼穹) Aka Kuu-chan. Looks like a elementary student at first glance but she is a high school senior. Her long black hair goes down to her waist. She has large cute eyes and a really cute appearance in general. Is manly and reliable. Making her perhaps Amane’s favorite.


Yurizono Arisu-san(百合園 アリス) She has long silver hair which shines brightly in the sunlight. With mysterious red eyes and a clear beautiful voice. Other one of the two beauties in school.百合園 also has the kanji for Yuri as in the lesbian kind in it. Also has pretty decent size breast.

It’s Alice using the super cutesy way of her referring to herself with her own name. I don’t always translate it, but I’ll do it some times, so keep that in mind. Also I don’t always translate the “-sans” but Amane usually uses them.



I was laid down on my bed with a cold towel placed on my forehead and a tissue stuffed up my nostrils. Kiniwa was sitting besides me. She had a fan and would use it blow air at my face.

This is awkward.

Although I don’t actually remember what happened after I fell unconscious in the bathroom, but apparently I actually got a cartoon nosebleed and that knocked me out.

I vaguely remember some stuff. I remember the mystically soft feeling that was pressed against my face and the terrible self hatred that came with it. As I thought, I still think like a man.


“Are you okay?”


Kiniwa asked with a worried face while she continued to fan my face.


“I-I’m okay.I’m sorry to make you worry. . .Thank you.”


She smiled at me in return.

I got a nosebleed and collapsed because of my lewd thoughts, but it seems that Kiniwa just thought I was sick.

Honestly I feel guilty about deceiving her.

By the way, Alice, Takanashi and Yanomiya were really worried about me collapsing, but once they realized I was okay they went to take a bath.

Alice was crying. . . I’m so sorry for making her worry, moreover I made her worry because I had those lewd thoughts.

I’ve been such a failure as a big brother Alice. . .I’m honestly disappointed in myself ,Feel like I want to die.

Although regardless of those feeling, Kiniwa fanning me is so comfortable. I just want to go to sleep.

I can’t just do that though. I’ve been a nuisance to everybody, I can’t just be relaxing.


“Your pajamas are cute.”


I muttered while I looked at Kiniwa.

I heard she bought new pajamas recently. She bought them just for this sleepover.

It is really cute.

She is wearing yellow pajamas with a cute duck drawn on it.

I especially like the cute duck. I also like the color yellow. It’s a perfect combination for me.

It’s pretty large , mostly because of her generous breast size.


“Fufu, thank you.”


She seemed to be happy that I complimented her.

She is a really kind person.

That reminds me, when I was a boy, Kiniwa would greet me many times when I saw her in the morning.

I didn’t think much of it at the time, I thought she was kind at the time, but I didn’t want to trouble her.

I always did have a good impression of her, but now I know she was truly a kind person, not just somebody who puts up a kind facade.


“I’m sorry for being an annoyance, so I want to do something to thank you, how about I cook something? I can cook you whatever you want tomorrow morning, Although I don’t really know if I have the ingredients here to cook what you want.”


I asked. Kiniwa placed her finger on her lip and tilted her head as. That gesture is a really cute girly thing. It fits her.


“Anything I want? Hmm cooking is alright.”

“Yeah. If there is anything I can give you let me know.”


She chuckled in response to my answer, then poked my cheek with her finger.


“Well, if that’s the case. I want a kiss on the cheek.”


My face instantly went red as Kiniwa gave a bashful smile. Her body was stiff.


“A-ahaha, hahaha. . Just kidding- – -”


I saw Kiniwa’s pure red face as she had an embarrassed smile. I got up from the bed and lightly kissed her cheek.

I know it’s not a joke. Kiniwa is always smiling, however. No, because of that, she thinks she can never act spoiled.

She said she was envious of Alice and wanted a older sister many times. So I know she isn’t just joking.


“Ena-chan is a good girl. But when you want to rely on somebody it’s okay to do that. Because I’ll act like your perfect Onee-chan.”


I said to Kiniwa with a smile.

I-I wonder if that was a little cheesy.


She was completely dumbfounded. She lightly touched the spot on her cheek I just kissed.

For the first time her smile disappeared.

D-did I just mess up?


“. . .I see.”


Her face instantly went red as she suddenly collapsed on the bed.


“E-Ena-chan! Ena-chan!”


I called out to her.

Her face was boiling red and her eyes had swirling whirlpools.

I don’t know if she collapsed because she hated it or liked it?

I have no idea what just happened.




“Ahaha! No, I give up! I give up!”


Takanashi walked into the room in her pajamas while laughing.

She closed the door and then- – –


“. . .I took a bath with Alice. . .My pride as a woman is destroyed.”


Her smile disappeared instantly, she muttered that, crumbling to all fours crying, completely dejected.


“W-W-what was that. Is Alice an angel? I think she is really an angel. I’ve been completely defeated. I’ve been utterly destroyed. . .”


While on all fours she complained while crying.

So she took a bath with Alice. So I guess she was really shocked by Alice’s beauty.

I honestly don’t really think Alice is that beautiful.

I think Takanashi is way cuter.

Although I guess from an outside perspective it’s a different story, Takanashi must have been really shocked by Alice’s body. I guess Alice is really beautiful.


“Oh? Is Ena alright?”


Takanashi quickly recovered right when she saw Kiniwa. Kiniwa was laying down on the bed while I fanned her face.


“S-she got tired of nursing. . .So she is taking a rest.”


I answered.

It would be better if I just don’t tell her she collapsed from my giving her a kiss on the cheek.


“Where is Alice and Kuu-chan?”


I tried to change the subject by asking that.


“It would’ve been dangerous to leave Yurizono alone while you were still in the shower. So we decided to take a bath when you were done, Although I quickly finished before them, Yurizono was going to join soon, but I wanted to spare myself from any more shock.”


She said with a half smile.

So Alice is still in the bath. Takanashi just wanted to make sure she wasn’t shocked even more by seeing Yurizono enter.

Yurizono and Yanomiya in a bath together. . .That’s a real sight to see.

Although in my opinion Kiniwa is a bigger risk.

. . Oh no, I’m getting a nosebleed again. Don’t think about it, don’t think about it. I tried to change the subject to get out of my head.


“I think this is the first time I’ve seen Rin-chan’s hair let down. It looks mature and beautiful.”


Takanashi always has her beautiful long black hair tied in twin tails, but right now , because she just got out of the bath her hair is let down. She looks so adult and the shine in her hair is beautiful.


“Usually I would rejoice, but right now I don’t really feel it. . .”


She muttered.

I think she looks a little better, but she is still feeling depressed.


“Oh, that’s right. Look here for a second.”


Suddenly Takanashi got a smile as she walked closer to me. She started to unbutton her black pajamas.

I tried to look away but then she sat down besides me on the bed while exposing her pajamas.


“These pajamas are pretty plain but there is a small chick embroiled on the bottom. Do you like chicks? I think I unintentionally bought it because of that.”(Tn:Chicks as in baby chickens.)


She gave a awkward smile and laughed as she opened her pajamas.

I looked down to the chicks she said where there.

But from my field of view I saw two bulges.

I tried to look down at what she was pointing to,but her opening was so close.

I couldn’t see it without unintentionally seeing those from my field of view.

Although I’m a big fan of ducks, I’m not necessary into chicks, but I think they are alright.


“Umm, Amane?”


A sudden voice brought me back to reality. I felt my face go hot as I quickly looked away.


“You were fixated on that, and then you face went red. Amane must really like chicks, I guess.”


Takanashi said with a smile. It wasn’t the chicks that made me red, though I don’t think I can actually tell her what the real reason is.

I just saw Kiniwa’s amazing body and now I am seeing peeks at Takanashi’s beautiful figure.

If I haven’t already had a nosebleed and fainted from seeing Kiniwa, I probably would’ve done it now.

I guess Kiniwa’s breast saved me from even more embarrassment. She is so kind even when it’s unintentional.




Alice and Yanomiya are watching Yurizono in Alice’s room.

Though in my room- – -.


“If we line up the futons next to each other it’s like we are on a school trip. Let’s do it! It’ll be fun!”


Takanashi seems to be having fun as she lined up our futons next to each other.


“I-Is that so.”


I gave a stiff smile back to Takanashi.

My heart is beating so fast.

I’m sleeping next to a girl with our futons connected. A girl like Takanashi more so.

By the way, Kiniwa went to sleep after losing consciousness, so she is just sleeping on my bed. While I’ll just sleep on a futon.


“Hey, before we go to bed. . .Can I say something?”


Takanashi smile disappeared as she sat down on her futon. Her face was dyed red, she played with her hands restlessly.

Why is she so nervous now? Did something happened? It’s cute, but I also have a bad idea about this.


“I toss and turn when I am asleep, however if there is a person nearby I end up hugging them in my sleep. Ena and Sora told me I do that. They probably would know, because they have slept over at my house.”


She said in a small embarrassed voice, only occasionally glancing at me and real quickly looking away.

She looked at me with upturned eyes.


“I wonder if it would just be better if I slept in the living room?”


With puppy dog eyes she asked in a dejected voice.

So you have a habit of using others has body pillows when they are in the same bed as you? I don’t know if it’s a good idea to sleep with her, but when Takanashi ask with her sweet voice and gives me those puppy eyes. I don’t know. Is it really alright to sleep in the same bed? She is trying to appeal to all my weaknesses.

Currently, there are a few tatami in this room. There are at least two futons on the floor, but she doesn’t want to separate them. Though I can’t just tell Takanashi to leave the room.


“O-Okay, it’s fine. . . .”


I could feel the cold sweat dripping from my body, though I tried my best to give her a smile as I said that.


“Thank you! I knew Amane was kind!”


She gave me a bright smile and thanked me.

I gave a cramped smile in response. I feel like it’s going to be a really long night. . .




The room is pitch black.


“Un—-n. A. . .mane. . . Onee. . .chan.”


Takanashi is hugging me closely while sleep talking in my ear.

She is glued so close to me.

Her whole body feels so soft, and I could smell the sweet soap she washed herself with.

Yea, I can’t sleep like this.


“Chuu. . .”


She then kissed my cheek.

Wait a second. I wasn’t warned about that! You told me you had a habit of hugging, not kissing.


“Amane. . .Onee. . . Chan. . .Chuu.”


She is holding me so tightly so I can’t move. Just muttering that in my ear and making my cheek wet from her kisses.

S-Somebody, Help. . . .


“Hnn. . .”


Then there was another voice heard. It sounded like somebody just grumbled up.

Somebody? Well the only other person here besides Takanashi is Kiniwa.


“Toilet. . . .”


Kiniwa grumbled as she sat up from the bed and went for the door. Hitting the wall before finally finding the exit.


“Heh Heh. . .Chuu.”


Takanashi continued her onslaught of tightly holding me and kissing me.


After awhile Kiniwa returned.

And then- – –


“Fwaa. . .”


I heard a yawn from Kiniwa, then I felt her lay down beside me, she snuggled close to me and embrace me.

I can feel her entire body. It’s so soft, especially a specific spot being pushed against my arm.

W-wait a second Kiniwa. That isn’t the right spot.


“Amane. . .”

“Onee. . . chan.”

“Amane. . .”

“Onee. . .chan.”


I can hear both of them call out from both sides. They where sweetly sleep talking in each ears and kissing me on the cheek on separate sides.


Morning eventually came without a single second of sleep.

That night was horrible and amazing at the same time.


Phew, it’s finally over. That one was a long one, at least compared to what I am used to. We got some fluff and the sleepover arc has concluded. Also I’ve read some of the reviews for this novel and if you guys have tips/advice, I’m open to discussing them, I can’t promise I’ll take all of them, but I’m open to talking, I don’t want to be a stagnant translator so I want to hear ways I could improve or what’s wrong with the translation. I usually translate these late in the night so I’m sure some errors fall through the cracks.

Next chapter is shorter so shouldn’t be that bad. So 3-5 days.

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13 thoughts on “When I became a Girl, an Unexpected Love Quarrel Occurred! Ch:17”

  1. Sandwiched between heavens gives a feeling of hell… and heaven nonetheless.
    Takanashi seem to be fantisizing about Amane as her Onee-chan all along haha…

    But i need moar Kuu-chan

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    1. Slowly nothing. I’m 100% sure they are preloaded as harem members. Hell they were probably potential harem members in his life when he was male and he didn’t realize it.

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      1. Probably. I’m sure he was good looking as well. Its just that his sister was a goddess and always bullied him so he had low self esteem.


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